雅思寫作怎么拿高分雅思高分作文的詞匯運用

雅思托福考試對于想要出國留學或移民的人來說，是一個非常重要的考試。因此，了解考試的時間表和出分時間對于準備考試的考生來說非常關鍵。下面中國教育在線外語頻道小編就為大家分享一下“雅思寫作怎么拿高分？雅思高分作文的詞匯運用”？

我們先來看看《劍橋雅思》(13)中，考官對一篇7分作文使用的詞匯所做的評價：

詞匯豐富，顯示出一定的準確性和靈活度，有不太常見的用詞，文體正式，搭配正確。比如：complex; list of favourites; fits...my ability;specific area; many available channels.

很明顯，7分作文詞匯需要一定的幅度，同時需要正式的文體和正確的搭配，不能有過于口語或方言式的表達。(這里順便說一句，被很多雅思老師推崇的I reckon，在表達I suppose/think這個意義時，其實只是一種特定群體才用的方言，不適合用于雅思作文中。)那么，一定幅度的詞匯指哪些詞匯呢?看看考官舉出的例子：complex, favorite, specific, available......，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，所謂高分詞匯，其實不是那些嚇人的詞匯，而是一些相對不常用的普通詞匯而已。按照老雅的估算，雅思寫作高分詞匯幅度大約可以定位在大學英語四級詞匯表里的中高段詞匯，也就是4000-5000那些詞匯。

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現(xiàn)在，我們一起看一篇《劍橋雅思》考官提供的雅思高分寫作(黑體部分是高分詞匯/組)。

題目：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? (劍橋雅思9，test 2)

高分范文：It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programmes. Most of the colleges are already providing opportunities to give work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion, sending students to work in community services is a good idea as it can provide them with many sorts of valuable skills.

Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills. Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have many after-school activities. After-school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV, browse the Internet or play Video games.

By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable or community organisations, they will be encouraged to do something more creative. Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. Students will also gain more respect towards work and money as they will realise that it is not that easy to earn them and hopefully will learn to spend them in a more practical way.

Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the NHS, and therefore any kind of spare time charity work will prevent them from sitting and doing nothing. It could also possibly reduce the crime level in the high school age group. If students have activities to do, they will not be bored and come up with silly ideas which can be dangerous for them or their surroundings.

In conclusion, I think this is a very good idea, and I hope this programme will be put into action for high schools and colleges shortly.

大家可以看看黑體字標示出來的高分詞匯和詞組，里面并無炫酷的大詞匯：involve, provide, valuable, organisational, browse, creative, asset, practical, promote, shortly，這些詞匯即使在大學英語四級詞匯表里，也算不上最難的詞匯。而且這還是所謂的9分作文，如果烤鴨的目標僅僅是7分，還可以進一步將其中某些詞匯簡單化。比如這句：Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. 如果考鴨對 an asset on...和employability的用法不熟悉，可以將本句改為：Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an attractive part of their CV but also help them find a job. 此外，評論一下本范文最后一段中的 I think this is a very good idea。很多雅思老師或雅思書籍上的規(guī)則都告訴學生，不要用I think，不要用good, 不要用a very good idea，因為這些太簡單，太口語化。但事實上，在高分范文中，類似表達并不少見。我們反對的是通篇使用這樣簡單的表達法(因為沒有幅度)，但這并不意味著這些表達法本身不能用在雅思寫作中。在一篇250字左右的作文中，如果有10個左右詞匯屬于以上我們定義的高分詞匯(即四級詞匯表中的中高段詞匯)就夠了，其余240個詞匯就用2000左右的一般詞匯就可以了。

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