雅思大作文父母參加育兒課程寫作思路分析及范文欣賞

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題目大意

照顧好孩子非常重要，因此父母雙方應(yīng)該參加育兒課程，問：你是否同意?

寫作思路解析

??規(guī)劃寫作任務(wù)，論證過程分兩個(gè)方面：

1.育兒教育的重要性.：

1)家長(zhǎng)給孩子提供的不單單是關(guān)心和照顧。

2) 家長(zhǎng)還需要對(duì)孩子有清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)，以及如何幫助培養(yǎng)他們的能力。

2. 育兒教育的重要性：

1) 孩子雙商的形成在上學(xué)前就已經(jīng)形成。

2) 家長(zhǎng)的行為和家庭的環(huán)境對(duì)孩子的感官，雙商，解決問題的能力有很大的影響。

關(guān)鍵詞：

Both：題干說到父母雙方都要接受育兒培訓(xùn)，考慮到很多父母都在職，去參加培訓(xùn)的確是有難度的，而且是雙方都要所以可以選擇否定雙方。

但是筆者在這篇文章選擇寫同意，重點(diǎn)落在家庭環(huán)境和父母行為對(duì)孩子的影響，這樣的話父母雙方都參加培訓(xùn)也是有必要的。

觀點(diǎn)類大作文，社會(huì)類話題

Taking care of children is important, so both mothers and fathers should take childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

題目來源：2013年1月19日大陸雅思大作文

高分寫作示范

Both positive and negative effects of childcare have proven to be long lasting. Therefore，there has been a surge of interest in arranging childcare courses for parents. Although it seems to be overreaching to require both parents participation in professionally organized childcare training, personally, I believe that both parents participation is advisable for the sake of providing growth-oriented environment for children.

The notion that the role of parents is to provide a safe place for children to relax, cater for childs emotional and physical needs, and provide consistent and responsive care is narrow and superficial. Instead，a lot more are expected from the role of parents and the parenting children received. First of all, taking training course allows parents tohave a clear perspective of what to expect from the childs developmentchild developmentally and are able to nurture his growing skills accordingly.

Simultaneously, researches prove that childrens foundational understanding of intelligence and emotion is formed before they even start explicitly learning a curriculum. It is the environment created by the parents that could stunt or facilitate a childs sensory, motor, emotional, and linguistic development. This is not only because children are prone to model everything a parent does and incorporate what they see into their own lives. Also, the home education system adopted by the parents and the level of support given to their children will directly affect their childrens intelligence development and problem-solving ability. Therefore, it is crucial for parents to take advice and training on how to behave themselves in front of their children and how to guarantee formal, structured environment for children to stretch and grow.

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