雅思寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)法備考寫(xiě)作中的主題句如何寫(xiě)好呢

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例1　Whats more, the outer space research should be maintained for its adventures, By adventures I mean that the astronauts are risking their lives. lt is true that some astronauts like those in challenger are devoted to the space programme. So, whether space research is valuable for welfare of human beings isalso a controversial problem.

【解析】：

第一句是主題句，表明觀點(diǎn)：太空研究應(yīng)當(dāng)繼續(xù)下去。

而這里的 for its adventures就只能理解為：為了探險(xiǎn)(這里用詞不當(dāng))。接下來(lái)支持句說(shuō):宇航員在冒生命的危臉，進(jìn)而提到挑戰(zhàn)者號(hào)的宇航員們?yōu)榇罂帐聵I(yè)獻(xiàn)出生命。最后，得出結(jié)論太空研究對(duì)于人類(lèi)的幸福是否具有價(jià)值這一問(wèn)題仍然具有爭(zhēng)議性。

從邏輯上說(shuō):主題句是正面觀點(diǎn)，即支持太空研究。而接下來(lái)的兩個(gè)支持句是反面觀點(diǎn)，其一，危險(xiǎn);其二，更危險(xiǎn)，有犧牲。最后的總結(jié)不正不反觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)太空探索具有爭(zhēng)議性。

那么，短短一個(gè)段落里，支持句不但沒(méi)有支持主題句，反而反對(duì)主題句這不是策反嗎?和主題句反看來(lái)，對(duì)看干，最后得出一個(gè)不正不反的結(jié)論，那就等于是走了一大圈最后又回到原來(lái)的出發(fā)點(diǎn)何!

①首先改掉語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤:標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)

②其次改邏輯問(wèn)題，下面修改了主題句，當(dāng)然也可以修改支持句;

③最后的結(jié)論也要出水芙蓉，渾然天成，反正就是要符合邏輯!

改正后的段落：

Whats more, the outor space research should be restricted to a certain extent，for we have paid too heavy costs in the past 40 years. Astronauts are risking life and limb in probing into the unknown frontier. On January 28, 1986, with an unquenchable desire to explore the mysterious and beautiful universe, seven star voyagers of the space shuttle Challenger embarked onto the miraculous universe yet lost their lives in the ensuing explosion only 70 seconds after the launching.

Those unparalleled scientists devoted themselves to the space shuttle program,which is an all-time loss to our universe program.Hence, in order to prevent such atragedy from recurring, more scientific work on space programme should be done before we finger the infinite universe again.

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