備戰(zhàn)雅思口語(yǔ),這些錯(cuò)誤別再犯了!
2023-11-02 16:01:02 來(lái)源:中國(guó)教育在線(xiàn)
隨著人們經(jīng)濟(jì)水平的提高,對(duì)于很多家庭來(lái)說(shuō),留學(xué)不再是一個(gè)可望而不可及的事情,許多人都想要留學(xué),那其中備戰(zhàn)雅思口語(yǔ),這些錯(cuò)誤別再犯了???針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題,下面中國(guó)教育在線(xiàn)小編就來(lái)和大家分享一下。
分析了一下同學(xué)們出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題,在這里做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單整理,分享給大家。
兩道題目很簡(jiǎn)單:
Q1:Did you like studying science subjects when you were younger?
Q2:Do you think studyingscience subjects isimportant?
一道事實(shí),一道觀(guān)點(diǎn)
先來(lái)說(shuō)這道觀(guān)點(diǎn)題
口語(yǔ)考試很忌諱答一些冠冕堂皇的X話(huà)。
很多同學(xué)把中文屁話(huà)翻譯成英文,以為可以搪塞考官,怕是把考官當(dāng)自己的高中老師了。
從小我們的中文教育會(huì)訓(xùn)練大家多講宏觀(guān)的東西,比如:
科學(xué)是人類(lèi)認(rèn)識(shí)和改造世界的工具
科學(xué)囊括了萬(wàn)事萬(wàn)物的運(yùn)行規(guī)律
科學(xué)是人類(lèi)智慧的高度結(jié)晶
科學(xué)是人類(lèi)文明進(jìn)步的推動(dòng)器
這種假大空、形而上、以贊美歌頌為主要目的X話(huà),我們很小就會(huì)說(shuō)了,因?yàn)榭荚嚳嫉亩?,所以修辭修得親媽都不認(rèn)識(shí)了。
了解一下Native Speakers受到過(guò)的教育和培訓(xùn)你就知道,為什么考試的時(shí)候考官會(huì)經(jīng)常不動(dòng)聲色地流露出悲傷和絕望的氣息?
因?yàn)樗麄冎幌肼?tīng)具象的內(nèi)容、具體的描述、細(xì)節(jié)支撐、例子證實(shí)、對(duì)比分析等等,不想聽(tīng)詩(shī)朗誦。
比如這樣一位同學(xué)的答案:
Q:Do you think studyingscience subjects isimportant?
A:Yes, absolutely. I think science is really important because its relevant to our daily life .
For the public,Scienceis includedthe nature、the world also ourselves, even the universe.
So if we want to know the world well, we must study some basic Science.
Also Science is the key of develop human civilization.
糾錯(cuò):
①此回答的第一處問(wèn)題是把science subjects一步登天直接抽象到science (even the universe)
②第二個(gè)問(wèn)題,沒(méi)有站得住腳的論證過(guò)程:原因1息息相關(guān)囊括萬(wàn)物+原因2人類(lèi)文明推動(dòng)器,沒(méi)有例子證實(shí)息息相關(guān),如果我不想know the world well我也可以不學(xué)科學(xué)對(duì)吧,做個(gè)無(wú)知的人也挺快樂(lè)的;人類(lèi)文明進(jìn)步只能證明科學(xué)的重要性不能證明理化生還是要好好學(xué)的,而且也沒(méi)有例子。
整個(gè)答案說(shuō)了等于沒(méi)說(shuō)?。?/p>
③其他錯(cuò)誤:
Scienceis included... 常見(jiàn)動(dòng)詞誤用,include就是包括了,不需要被動(dòng)
the key of develop介詞的賓語(yǔ):名詞(development)動(dòng)名詞(developing)
再來(lái)看,答案方向與上文相似,但有一定進(jìn)步的:
比如下面這位同學(xué):
Q:Do you think studyingscience subjects isimportant?
A: Yes,definitely. Because in my opinion,science plays a vital role even just in our daily life.
For instance,without basic knowledge of it we would never tell the weather for the next day, no mention of the appropriate clothes to wear.
so only when we study science,can we have the chance to keep the close tie with the world.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
無(wú)論講得怎么樣,這個(gè)同學(xué)好歹是有意識(shí)去舉例子的。
考官面前,舉例子和不舉例子的人,不在同一個(gè)賽道上。
不過(guò)U1S1,預(yù)測(cè)天氣這事情,大家已經(jīng)脫離了看云看草看燕子低飛的低級(jí)趣味了,天氣預(yù)報(bào)挺好用的,可以換一個(gè)例子,比如生物學(xué)知識(shí)讓我知道綜合維生素都是智商稅。
細(xì)節(jié)錯(cuò)誤:
no mention of 是未提及,
not to mention to 才是更不必說(shuō)
在簡(jiǎn)單的喜好型問(wèn)題面前,大家也會(huì)暴露出沒(méi)有細(xì)節(jié)的問(wèn)題,比如下面這個(gè)同學(xué)
Q:Did you like studying science subjects when you were younger?
A:Yes,when I was in primary school, Science is one of my favourite subject.
這是比較極端的一種情況,接下來(lái)考生肯定會(huì)因?yàn)榭脊龠B環(huán)追問(wèn)why?why?why?而陷入被動(dòng)的。P1答題的長(zhǎng)度是用時(shí)間來(lái)衡量的,一道P1平均20~25s。
與之相對(duì)的,就是有的同學(xué)知道該講事實(shí)型細(xì)節(jié)并且努力呈現(xiàn)的:
Absolutely yes. I studied a lot of science subjects when I was in school, like observing the plant cellular structure which is so interesting.
It will open the new world for you through studying a variety of things about the nature you ever know before.
Anyway, Science is amazing!
點(diǎn)評(píng):
U1S1 長(zhǎng)度還是有點(diǎn)短,不過(guò)講到植物細(xì)胞結(jié)構(gòu),已經(jīng)是非常直接扣題的例子了。
很多同學(xué)會(huì)在這里吐槽,雅思口語(yǔ)不是不考專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)么?
其實(shí)人家順手舉一個(gè)自己很熟的例子而已,你不會(huì)你別吵吵,你可以用別的:
studying the interesting changes happening inside a tube化學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)
observing cells of plants and animals under the microscope生物實(shí)驗(yàn)
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