雅思大作文開頭怎么寫

近年來，越來越多的中國學(xué)子選擇留學(xué)，那其中雅思大作文開頭怎么寫？本文則針對這個(gè)問題，為大家整理了資料，接下來咱們就一起往下了解吧。

雅思 大作文開頭怎么寫

在雅思大作文的寫作中， 開頭段一般由general statement，argument， thesis statement兩部分構(gòu)成。下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思大作文開頭怎么寫的資料，歡迎查閱。

1General Statement

General Statement的主要作用是介紹寫作背景，引入話題。

但是值得注意的是：不能照抄題目，應(yīng)用同義詞、近義詞替換題目中的相關(guān)詞語，

并用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)來改寫題目中的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。例如：

Example 1:

It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers. It is therefore more important for mothers to spend time with children than fathers. Others think fathers make equally good parents. What is your opinion?

在這個(gè)題目中，首先我們可以看到題干表述用了三個(gè)句子，首先我們要區(qū)分哪句是general statement， 哪句是arguments. 其實(shí)很容易發(fā)現(xiàn)，通常句中間有明顯闡述觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)的，就是arguments, 而做客觀陳述的就是general statement，其位置一般是題目的第一句。上題中 It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers， 就是我們要拿來做同義改寫，放到我們開頭段作為背景的句子。同義改寫可以采取以下技巧：

1 同義句型轉(zhuǎn)換。

如 It is widely believed that… 這個(gè)句套表達(dá)某事情是眾所周的，它有很多同義句型，如 It is generally assumed that…, Common knowledge is that…, 等。

2 同義詞，近義詞，同義結(jié)構(gòu)轉(zhuǎn)換。

如by nature 這個(gè)介詞詞組表達(dá)的含義是，自然天性上的，在原句中作為be動詞的表語，我們可以改寫為一個(gè)同義名詞詞組，nurturing instinct，自然天性的意思。相應(yīng)的，前面的謂語動詞要發(fā)生變化，搭配have。

3 造并列結(jié)構(gòu)。

有的時(shí)候我們可能發(fā)現(xiàn)原題中的表述無論詞語還是句型都不是很輕易的可以找出同義結(jié)構(gòu)出來，那么我們可以采取并列結(jié)構(gòu)，即并列兩個(gè)近義詞語義，或者反義詞再加否定結(jié)構(gòu)。

上題中的better parents than 可以改為 better or less dispensable parents than

通過上面的三個(gè)步驟，我們就可以成功的將原題的背景句改寫為我們開頭段的general statement。

原題：It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers.

改寫完后：It is generally assumed that women have a ‘nurturing instinct’that somehow makes them better or less dispensable parents than fathers are.

General Statement常用句型：

With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in…in the past few years. (雖常用，但已被濫用，建議減少使用)

Along with the increasingly rapid _____________, more problems are brought to our attention.

The issue of whether or not __________ has been widely/ heatedly/ debated currently/recently.

When it comes to whether …, some… are strongly against it, claiming….

It is generally accepted/ It is indeed the case that most countries have seen an increase in _______ over recent years.

2Argument(爭議)

Argument即為題目表述的觀點(diǎn)的立場，不同題目的立場表述大有不同。

(1)有的題目中只有一個(gè)立場

e.g. Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在我們寫的開頭段，在寫完general statement后，直接用One point is that…把原題的立場(countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time) 同義轉(zhuǎn)述即可。

值得注意的是，這個(gè)題目本身沒有背景句，所以寫general statement的時(shí)候，需要我們根據(jù)題目的argument進(jìn)行總結(jié)。

亦或者可以general statement 和argument這兩個(gè)部分合并為一個(gè)部分，

這個(gè)題目可寫成：The issue of whether or not countries with a long average working hours are more successful in terms of economic development than those countries which do not have a long working time has been heatedly debated currently. As far as I am concerned, …

(2)有的題目中包含兩個(gè)互相否定或者相關(guān)的立場

e.g. Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

e.g. Some people think the best way to reduce crimes is to give longer prison sentence. Others,however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss and give your opinion.

這樣的題目，在開頭段寫完general statement后，要把題目雙方的立場都轉(zhuǎn)述，不可減少或刪除一方立場。

如 Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

可以轉(zhuǎn)述為：Quite a few people claim that it has brought great benefits. On the other hand, those who think differently argue that it inevitably would has negative influence.

3Thesis Statement (總論點(diǎn))

Thesis Statement簡單來說就是作者對某一寫作話題所持的明確觀點(diǎn)。例如：

1 In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned/ To my mind, students should wear uniforms in school.

2 While the majority may like to live in a large family, I prefer to the small one.

在雅思寫作中，文章的立場，也就是全文的總論點(diǎn)，

主要分兩種：有傾向性立場和兩邊支持

有傾向性(一邊倒)

有傾向性的立場一般在文章的開頭即表明本文的立場，同意或者不同意，或者多大程度地同意和不同意。

在劍橋雅思的考官范文中，有一個(gè)題目涉及對教育免費(fèi)的商榷：All education,primary, secondary school and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

考官在范文的開頭段中即明確表明自己的立場：I certainly agree with the statement that this should be the case.

當(dāng)然，有傾向性的立場還包含讓步的觀點(diǎn)，這種立場的文章多見于以to what extent do you agree or disagree?提問的論題。

如：Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead of individuals and private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在考官范文的開頭段中，立場是這樣表明的：I concede that the government should lead the efforts in addressing the environmental problems. Nevertheless, cooperation and participation from the cooperations and individual citizens are essential as well.

讓步的立場并不需要糾結(jié)于在句子中回答到底agree 或者disagree沒有, 清楚的說明自己的觀點(diǎn)即可。

值得注意的是，觀點(diǎn)有傾向性并不代表思路有局限性。在辯論中，作者既要證明自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也要回應(yīng)對方的觀點(diǎn)，也就是說能夠站在不同的角度看同一個(gè)事情，并且能看到各自的優(yōu)劣。

兩邊都支持

這種文章立場一般常見于discuss both view and give your opinion這種提問方式的題目。立場一般建議在結(jié)尾段點(diǎn)明，并且要在結(jié)尾段明確題干兩者之間的關(guān)系。

(4) 開頭段的兩種常用寫作方法

將以上三個(gè)部分組合起來，我們步難得出開頭段的以下兩種寫法：

A. General Statement – Positive+Negative Idea – Thesis Statement

The issue of whether or not students should take a part-time job has been widely/ heatedly debated currently/ recently. Quite a few people claim that it would not only widen their horizon but also help shape their personalities. On the other hand, those who think differently argue that the task of a student is to make good use of his limited time and acquire necessary knowledge and skill for the future career. As for me/ As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion, I believe that part-time jobs play a positive role in the development of university students.

這種方法的一個(gè)變形形式是：

General Statement – Opposite Idea – Thesis Statement

Nowadays the incomes of many sport stars are truly astounding. Some people claim that the salaries of athletes are too high and the athletes themselves attract too much attention. Yet, in my opinion, such benefits are well deserved.

B. General Statement – Concession – Thesis Statement

When it comes to whether students should be allowed to work outside the school hours, some educators vote against it, claiming that part-time work may have a negative influence on their study. Obviously, too large amount of time a student is employed may contribute to a poor academic performance. However, if they do a part-time job over reasonable hours, it is extremely beneficial for them, providing financial support for their study and broadening their horizon.

When evaluating a job applicant, most companies would place much weight on one’s educational certificate. Of course, one’s educational certificate does tell something about the applicant. However, it is not the only means through which we can judge whether the applicant is qualified or not.

雅思寫作都有哪些評分細(xì)則

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是我們寫作教學(xué)和備考唯一可以參考的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，所以，考生應(yīng)該把它牢牢地印到腦海里。雅思寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不像四六級或托福采用整體式的評分，而是分項(xiàng)式評分(analytical scoring)，根據(jù)具體的評分細(xì)則分項(xiàng)給分。

Task 1 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

完成任務(wù)(Task Achievement)：有效地辨別、說明和報(bào)道圖中的關(guān)鍵信息;

連貫與銜接(Coherence and Cohesion)：信息和觀點(diǎn)組織、銜接是否恰當(dāng);

詞匯量(Lexical Resource)：詞匯多樣、準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng);

語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣、準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)。

Task 2 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

任務(wù)回應(yīng)(Task Response)：清晰、有效、完整、鮮明地回答所有問題;

連貫與銜接(Coherence and Cohesion)：信息和觀點(diǎn)組織、分段、闡述、銜接是否恰當(dāng);

詞匯量(Lexical Resource)：詞匯多樣、準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng);

語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy): 語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣、準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析【Essential Points of the Band Deors】

結(jié)合雅思官方對寫作 6 分、7 分、8 分、9 分的評分細(xì)則，我們可以把雅思寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)亦即高分作文的要點(diǎn)歸結(jié)為十字方針：主題(Theme) 、細(xì)節(jié)(Detail)、結(jié)構(gòu)(Frame)、邏輯(Logic)、語言(Language)。

具體說，主題即觀點(diǎn)，要緊扣題目，明確而有見地;論點(diǎn)要緊扣主題，并能夠很好地展開，論據(jù)要具體、有說服力;結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，邏輯要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、合理而有層次感;語言要流暢、準(zhǔn)確、多樣，并有一定的復(fù)雜性。

其中，行文邏輯是高分的基礎(chǔ)，語言是整個(gè)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的核心內(nèi)容，涉及到考生作文詞匯的選取(Word Choice)、句式的變化(SyntacticVariety)、語法的準(zhǔn)確性(Accuracy of Grammar)等多個(gè)方面，是體現(xiàn)學(xué)生英語語言水平的關(guān)鍵因素，所以考生應(yīng)當(dāng)把寫作思路的訓(xùn)練和語言的修煉作為雅思寫作備考的重中之重。

雅思范文都是怎么寫的

雅思作文題目：

In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?過去知識儲藏在書籍里，現(xiàn)在知識保存在網(wǎng)絡(luò)中。是利是弊?

雅思作文范文：

第一段，同義改寫，表明觀點(diǎn)

In the current era, knowledge can be preserved on the Internet. Some people may argue that there exist more drawbacks when books are substituted by the Internet in terms of storing knowledge, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

第二段，寫一下網(wǎng)絡(luò)信息的麻煩的地方，然后轉(zhuǎn)折回來

Admittedly, users may be confused about knowledge on the Internet. Most authors hold a serious attitude towards publishing a book and will be responsible for what they write in their books. However, since the Internet is open to everyone, many amateurs pretend to be masters in some domains and deliberately spread incorrect information, which brings difficulties to beginners since they may not tell the different between right and wrong. Nevertheless, there still exist more merits if information is preserved on the Internet.

第三段，不變質(zhì)

To begin with, storing knowledge on the Internet may avoid knowledge loss to some degree. It is true that books can contain knowledge, but most books will deteriorate with age and cannot be read anymore after decades of years. However, if knowledge is stored on the Internet, as long as computers are not damaged, knowledge can still be obtained from hard drives after a long time. Thus, Internet can store knowledge for a longer time while books are limited by characteristics of paper.

第四段，效率高

In addition, users may save a lot of time when they search information on the Internet. In the past, when people intended to find a book they want, they had to go to a library and wasted some time on finding books on the shelf. By contrast, with search engines, users can acquire knowledge in a short time by typing in some key words in a database. There is no need for people to spend time on commuting and they can just sit in front of a computer and gain what they need quickly.

第五段：小小總結(jié)就好

To sum up, the merits of storing knowledge on the Internet may overshadow the detriments caused, considering that computers can preserve knowledge for a longer time and users can find information they need efficiently.

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