long working day is helpful for countries to become economically successful雅思寫(xiě)作7.5分范文

雅思寫(xiě)作題目

Some countries have a long working day,which is helpful for them to become economically successful,but it also causes some negative social problems.To what extent do you agree or not?

一些國(guó)家工作時(shí)間較長(zhǎng)，這雖然有助于它們?nèi)〉媒?jīng)濟(jì)上的成功，但它也會(huì)引發(fā)許多社會(huì)問(wèn)題。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意？

雅思寫(xiě)作范文

開(kāi)頭段

In some countries working long hours is regarded as the norm.Economic success resulting from long work hours comes at a price for families,people’s health and may contribute to higher unemployment.In my opinion,the long term consequences are too grave to ignore and an effort must be made to reduce long working hours.

在一些國(guó)家，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作被當(dāng)成是習(xí)以為常的東西。但它所帶來(lái)的經(jīng)濟(jì)成功以家庭和人們的健康為代價(jià)，而且還可能造成較高的失業(yè)率。在我看來(lái)，其長(zhǎng)期后果十分嚴(yán)峻，不容忽視。我們必須努力縮減工作時(shí)長(zhǎng)。

對(duì)員工身體有害

The most serious effect of working overtime constantly is putting employee’s health at risk and causing illness,early retirement or even premature deaths.When working long hours it is more difficult to maintain a healthy lifestyle,like finding time to exercise and relax.An unhealthy lifestyle increases the risk of heart disease,diabetes and stress-related illnesses.Being chronically overworked can also cause psychological problems,like burnout,depressions or even suicides.All these health problems can cause high immaterial and material cost to society.

加班最嚴(yán)重的后果是危害員工健康，并引發(fā)疾病，提前退休，甚至死亡。長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作下很難維持健康的生活習(xí)慣，比如找時(shí)間鍛煉或者放松。不健康的生活方式會(huì)提升患心臟病，糖尿病以及其他與壓力相關(guān)的疾病的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。長(zhǎng)期過(guò)度工作還會(huì)引發(fā)心理問(wèn)題，比如過(guò)度勞累、抑郁甚至是自殺。所有這些健康問(wèn)題都會(huì)給社會(huì)帶來(lái)極高的物質(zhì)和非物質(zhì)成本。

對(duì)家庭有害

Another problem is the workforce’s limited time for social contacts and families.Long work hours do not make a very family-friendly environment.People may find it hard to raise children and work.In particular,women may have to decide against working or having children.Because of long work hours,some employees will not find the time for a relationship or family at all and remain single.Consequently,birth rates are likely to fall,which can for example be observed in Japan.A low birthrate might leave society with an ageing population and results in many hard to solve problems.

另外一個(gè)問(wèn)題是員工用于社交和家庭生活的時(shí)間有限。長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的工作不會(huì)造就十分友好的家庭氛圍。人們可能發(fā)現(xiàn)同時(shí)養(yǎng)育孩子和工作十分困難。尤其是女性可能必須在工作或者生孩子之間二選一。由于較長(zhǎng)的工作時(shí)間，一些員工沒(méi)時(shí)間談戀愛(ài)或組建家庭，并一直單身。這樣一來(lái)，生育率可能下降，正如日本那樣。較低的生育率會(huì)使社會(huì)老齡化并造成一些難以解決的問(wèn)題。

引發(fā)失業(yè)

Lastly,companies that require longer work hours will employ fewer people in total.It is obvious that if people would only work regular hours more people would be employed instead of some people being overworked and other unable to find work.The society has picked up the bill for most of the cost of unemployment and the consequences of people working too much.

最后，要求較長(zhǎng)工作時(shí)間的公司會(huì)雇傭較少的員工。顯然，如果員工工作時(shí)間正常，那么更多的人就會(huì)被聘用，而不是一些人加班，其他人無(wú)法找到工作。社會(huì)最終為失業(yè)和加班買(mǎi)單。

結(jié)論

In conclusion,I believe that the advantages of long work hours exist only short-term.The negative effects are a burden to society.It would be beneficial if governments and companies understand the long-term cost and limit long work hours to short-term overflow work.

總的來(lái)說(shuō)，我認(rèn)為長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作只存在短期好處，長(zhǎng)期來(lái)看，它會(huì)對(duì)社會(huì)造成負(fù)擔(dān)。如果政府和公司能夠理解其長(zhǎng)期成本并限制工作時(shí)間的話會(huì)更有利一些。

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