教育資金-雅思寫作同意與否-雅思大作文范文more money on education

雅思寫作大作文題目

Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

相比于休閑和運動來說，政府應該在教育上投入更多的資金。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意這種看法？

雅思寫作大作文范文

開頭段

Almost all governments,across the globe,have a yearly budget to distribute money for various activities.I agree that governments should allocate a higher budget for education compared to recreation and sports.This can be proven by analysing how spending more money on education can reduce unemployment rate as well as decrease crime rate and can positively enhance the people’s life standard.

全球幾乎所有國家的政府都有年度預算來為各種活動分配資金。我認為，與娛樂和體育相比，政府應為教育分配更高的預算。這可以通過分析證明，花更多的錢在教育上如何減少失業(yè)率并降低犯罪率，并可以積極改善人們的生活水平。

主體段1

If more people are educated in a country,it is apparent that the employment rate of that nation will be high,as there are a lot of skilled employments available throughout the world.But to have many people educated,the governments should provide good education system which is affordable by the citizens.For example,as the report published in the Week magazine during August 2015,America has very less unemployment rate as the government provides best quality education to the citizens at a very minimal fee.Thus,it is obvious that the government should focus on spending more on the education sector.The recreation and sports activities are also important for people but the education has far better importance.

如果一個國家有更多的人受教育，那么該國家的就業(yè)率顯然會很高，因為全世界有很多需要相應技能的就業(yè)機會。但是要讓很多人受教育，政府應該提供良好的教育體系，使公民負擔得起。例如，根據(jù)2015年8月在《周刊》上發(fā)表的報告，美國政府的失業(yè)率非常低，因為政府以極低的費用向公民提供了最優(yōu)質(zhì)的教育。因此，很明顯，政府應該將重點放在教育部門上。娛樂和體育活動對人們也很重要，但是教育的重要性要高得多。

主體段2

As society has more social knowledge,the crime rate will be reduced.This is due to the fact that education creates a positive mentality among the people.For instance,as the BBC report telecasted on January 2015,Nigeria has a crime rate which is 20 times more than the USA.Therefore it is the responsibility of the governments to ensure that the citizens are educated by providing adequate infrastructure.In addition to that,governments should even make secondary education free and mandatory.Hence it is very clear that governments must allocate a higher budget for education.Sports and other recreation can improve people’s life standard but what benefits it can bring when people have poverty and they are engaging in crime?

隨著社會整體擁有更多的知識，犯罪率將會降低。這是由于教育在人們中間建立了積極的心態(tài)。例如，根據(jù)2015年1月廣播的BBC報告，尼日利亞的犯罪率是美國的20倍。因此，政府的責任是通過提供足夠的基礎設施來確保公民受到教育。除此之外，政府甚至應該提供免費和強制性的中等教育。因此，很明顯，政府必須為教育設置更高的預算。體育和其他娛樂活動可以改善人們的生活水平，但是當人們陷入貧困并從事犯罪活動時，體育運動和娛樂活動可以帶來什么好處呢？

結(jié)論

By analysing how allocating more money for education can increase the employment rate and make the earth a safer place to live,it is very important that governments should allocate a higher percentage of the budget on education.It is predicted that importance is given to recreation and sports as well,but not at the cost of education.

通過分析為教育分配更多的資金如何可以提高就業(yè)率并使地球成為更安全的生活場所，各國政府應在教育預算中分配更高的比例，這一點非常重要?？梢灶A見的是，娛樂和體育也很重要，但并不應以教育為代價。

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