托福寫(xiě)作范文|關(guān)于創(chuàng)新的托福寫(xiě)作范文與解析

　　In order to succeed, it's better for a person to act the same as others rather than behave differently from others.

　　題型：比較

　　論點(diǎn)：讓步

　　角度：具象拆分

　　開(kāi)頭 ：與眾不同可以讓人成 功（話題引入 +正反方觀點(diǎn) +自我觀點(diǎn)及過(guò)渡句）

　　Success is something that every one of us is drooling over and there are indeed various roads that take us to success, just like an old saying goes, “all road lead to Rome”。 Among those roads, there are two that are always talked about: to act exactly like others and to keep different from others. As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to choose the latter path, namely, keeping distinct by following my own heart. Here are two cases in point that can best illustrate my point of view. （89 字）

　　中間段 1：蘋(píng) 果 公 司 ——敢于破壞再創(chuàng)造，顛覆自我，與眾不同，口號(hào) “think different”，重新定義和發(fā)明手機(jī)，引領(lǐng)潮流。

　　The first case is famous Apple Inc. As is known to all, Apple is the company that dares to challenge and overturn the old routines by creating something that never exists before. The most renowned catchphrase of the company, “think different”， embodies in its unbelievable products. When other cell——phone manufacturers were engaged in producing classic——designed cell——phones with colorful screen and QWERTY keyboard, Apple had taken steps to differentiate itself by launching a unprecedented product——iPhone. It's multi——touch technology and no-——keyboard design was soon to draw everybody's attention, and iPhone sets a new industrial standard. The miraculous achievement of Apple Inc. should be attributed to its keeping different from others. （109 字）

　　中間段 2：特 斯 拉 電 動(dòng) 汽 車(chē) Tesla，超 強(qiáng) 動(dòng) 力 ，前 沿 設(shè) 計(jì) ，顛 覆（ overthrow） 傳統(tǒng)汽車(chē)行業(yè)以及人們對(duì)電動(dòng)車(chē)的認(rèn)知。

　　Another example is a star enterprise that seems to start a revolution in automobile industry——“Tesla”。 “Tesla” is an electric vehicle manufacturer based in California, US. Different from traditional electric car manufacturer, Tesla has adopted an electricity——based engine that delivers remarkable power and its acceleration reaches an unbelievable 5 seconds per 100-?﹎eter （much more than that of Golf by Volkswagen）。 Moreover, a breakthrough in batter technology makes it possible that a full-?ヽharged battery can support the car to run constantly for approximately 400 kilometers. The brand new powertrain and the extraordinary driving experience make Tesla a great hit across the United States.（102 字）

　　讓步：創(chuàng)新也有缺點(diǎn)，比如研發(fā)成本很高，造成資源浪費(fèi)。但是（打壓， 次要問(wèn)題） 跟沿襲舊規(guī)、 不思革新相比， 創(chuàng)新的這些缺點(diǎn)是次要問(wèn)題。 所 以還是要?jiǎng)?chuàng)新，還是要保持與 眾不同。

　　Admittedly，keeping different can have one or two downsides. For instance, the cost will be high because everything starts from scratch, and one might go through trials and error at the very beginning. However, high cost and making mistakes are a really minor issue if we take into consideration following the steps of predecessors and being content with the way things are without making any change. Therefore, being different is a must if one wants to be successful.（79 字）

　　結(jié)尾：重申觀點(diǎn)，歸納理由 /升華主題

　　Ina nutshell, in order to be successful, one needs to think out of the box and keep different than others. There is a widespread idea that goes, Messi is the successor of Mara Dona in football and Bryant the successor of Jordan in basketball. But in fact, nobody should bear the obligation to be the duplicate of someone else. Only if one chooses his own road, can his predecessor possibly be taken over.（74 字）