托福獨立口語高頻話題：誰應該對孩子的教育更負責，學校還是父母?

托福獨立口語高頻話題：誰應該對孩子的教育更負責，學校還是父母?

托福獨立口語高頻話題

Who should be more responsible for children's education,schools or parents?

學生對此話題的表述答案

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations.For me,that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations.First,that childrens spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge.And therefore,I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.

批改意見

語法方面出現(xiàn)的錯誤(Grammar)

1 educations————education

2 childrens spend————children spend

3 children is————children are

4 and therefore————Therefore

表達部分存在的問題(Expression)

1 for childrens education(delete)

2 For me,I think————I think

3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable

高頻話題高分口語模板分享

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education,I think that the school should be more responsible.First,children spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable.Therefore,I think the children are more influenced by the schools.Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.

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