雅思口語(yǔ)話題及范文:idea for improving something at work

雅思口語(yǔ)話題及范文:idea for improving something at work

題目

You should say:

When and where you had your idea

What your idea was

Who you told about your idea

And explain why you thought your idea would make an improvement.

你應(yīng)該說(shuō)：

你在何時(shí)何地有了自己的想法

你的想法是什么

你把你的想法告訴了誰(shuí)

并解釋為什么你認(rèn)為你的想法會(huì)有所改進(jìn)。

范文

I used to teach in a school which had 1,600 students, aged from 11 to 18. The majority of the children aged from 11 to 16 remained in school all day and if they had to leave，they did so via the school office and the main entrance. The school was situated in the centre of the town and was always in danger of having intruders. The students aged from 16 to 18 were allowed to leave whenever they pleased by an exit far from the main office. This exit/entrance remained open throughout the day and therefore intruders could get in.

The proposal I made was that the open gate should be replaced by a high security sliding gate. The gate would open for a fixed period after a student used a swipe plastic card to activate the opening mechanism. I got the idea from the type of cards used in hotels to replace room keys. Cards could easily exclude intruders from the system by having the whole system linked to a computer. The system would have also kept a computerised record of the movement of each student in and out of the building. If a student forgot his/her card，they would have to exit via the main entrance and the school office.

Sadly, my idea was not adopted because of the cost and the fact that the students objected a computerised record of their entries and departures from the school.

我曾在一所有1600名學(xué)生的學(xué)校任教，年齡從11歲到18歲。大多數(shù)11歲至16歲的兒童整天留在學(xué)校，如果必須離開(kāi)，他們會(huì)通過(guò)學(xué)校辦公室和正門離開(kāi)。這所學(xué)校位于市中心，總是有入侵者的危險(xiǎn)。16歲至18歲的學(xué)生可以在遠(yuǎn)離主辦公室的出口處隨時(shí)離開(kāi)。該出口/入口全天開(kāi)放，因此入侵者可以進(jìn)入。

我提出的建議是，應(yīng)該用一個(gè)高安全性的滑動(dòng)門來(lái)代替敞開(kāi)的門。學(xué)生使用刷卡啟動(dòng)開(kāi)啟機(jī)制后，大門將開(kāi)啟一段固定的時(shí)間。我是從酒店用來(lái)代替房間鑰匙的卡片類型中得到這個(gè)想法的。通過(guò)將整個(gè)系統(tǒng)連接到計(jì)算機(jī)，卡可以輕松地將入侵者排除在系統(tǒng)之外。該系統(tǒng)還將保存每個(gè)學(xué)生進(jìn)出大樓的計(jì)算機(jī)記錄。如果學(xué)生忘了帶卡，他們必須從正門和學(xué)校辦公室離開(kāi)。

遺憾的是，我的想法沒(méi)有被采納，因?yàn)槌杀咎?，而且學(xué)生們反對(duì)用計(jì)算機(jī)記錄他們的入學(xué)和離校情況。

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