2021年11月6雅思大作文范文：社交媒體的利弊

2023-07-01 12:22:16 來源：中國教育在線

2021年11月6雅思大作文范文：社交媒體的利弊

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events.

Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

媒體類

【題目解析】

題目大意：人們每天都使用社交媒體與別人交流以及獲取新聞消息。

要求考生回答題目所給的現(xiàn)象"優(yōu)大于劣"還是"劣大于優(yōu)"。

這個題目是優(yōu)劣勢題型，但實際上也屬于"觀點類"題型，故一定要明確地在開頭段給出個人觀點，即"優(yōu)大于劣"或"劣大于優(yōu)"。

【寫作思路】

Para 1：開頭段 - 改寫題目+個人觀點（優(yōu)大于劣）

Para 2：優(yōu)點1 - 與他人保持良好的關(guān)系

Para 3：優(yōu)點2 - 及時了解事件

Para 4：缺點 – 健康受到威脅

Para 4：總結(jié)段 – 重申個人觀點+總結(jié)主體段要點+建議

【參考范文】

Social media are gaining increasing popularity, through which individuals communicate with others and obtain news information on a daily basis. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits of this prevail over the drawbacks.

The primary benefit of people's everyday exposure to social media is that they can maintain a sound relationship with others. Young people attending university in another city or country can keep in touch with their family and friends, conveniently sharing their lives with each other. Working adults can easily communicate with their clients, which eventually contributes to their work performance.

Another major advantage is that people can understand what is happening across their country or over the globe in a timely fashion. In the past, the public could hear about the world one or two days after the events had happened as the technology then was under-developed. In contrast, news applications on electronic devices today can automatically send users instant messages, making it possible for them to know about current affairs without waiting.

However, the disadvantages of people being exposed to social media daily cannot be ignored, the most obvious of which is that their physical health can be threatened. If they spend an excessive amount of time on social media, chatting and keeping up with the news, they may lead a sedentary life, lacking proper exercise. In the end, they are likely to suffer from eye fatigue, headaches, and backaches.

In conclusion, I reiterate that there are more positive influences than negative ones if people use social media in their everyday lives to talk to people and access news coverage. After all, they can maintain good relationships with others and know about the world without delay. Nevertheless, I understand that using social media every day can damage their fitness. Therefore, I suggest parents control their offspring's screen time and adults participate in various activities.

【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.gaining increasing popularity 越來越受歡迎

2.obtain news information 獲取新聞消息

3.on a daily basis 每天

4.exposure to 接觸

5.maintain a sound relationship 保持良好的關(guān)系

6.attend university 上大學(xué)

7.working adults 有工作的人

8.client (n.) 客戶

9.contribute to 對…做出貢獻

10.work performance 工作表現(xiàn)

11.in a timely fashion 及時地