2022年9月24日雅思大作文范文:機器人對人類的影響

2022年9月24日雅思大作文范文:機器人對人類的影響

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development,while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

科技類

【題目解析】

題目大意：一些人認為機器人對于人類未來發(fā)展十分重要，但是另一些人認為它們非常危險并且對社會有消極影響。討論雙方觀點并給出你的看法。

【思路分析】本題考查機器人所帶來的影響。在之前的題目當中曾經(jīng)也出現(xiàn)過類似主題。關(guān)于機器人的討論，大家比較熟悉的應該是在就業(yè)方面的影響，也就是會導致大量失業(yè)。此外消極影響也可以從安全性角度以及后期是否會產(chǎn)生智能危害人類角度，不過不建議寫成很多電影或科幻小說中呈現(xiàn)的過于遙遠的機器統(tǒng)治地球等內(nèi)容。好處方面也比較容易想到，主要是在完成工作時的表現(xiàn)以及完成的工作種類方面，此外機器人目前也普遍應用在醫(yī)療、家用、娛樂等各種場景，將來會有更多的功能和潛力改變?nèi)祟惿睢?/p>

【寫作思路】

開頭段：改寫題目雙方觀點，表明自己的立場。

主體第一段：說明機器人的廣泛使用可能會帶來的問題。主要是兩個方面，包括事業(yè)問題以及突發(fā)情況時不能靈活處理問題，可能帶來更大的損失等。

主體第二段：說明機器人能夠為人類發(fā)展帶來的好處。包括工作方面可以解放勞動力，并且完成危險和人類不能做的工作。并且在生活場景中的應用廣泛也可以帶來生活質(zhì)量的提高。

結(jié)尾段：強調(diào)個人立場，表明新技術(shù)的出現(xiàn)總會帶來很大的變化，但是機器人對人類的未來發(fā)展的重要性是肯定的。

【參考范文】

Our society has been undergoing numerous technological changes,among which is the rapid growth of the robotics industry.While some people express their concerns about the possible adverse impacts,I would argue that robots can offer vast benefits for humans’future development.

On the one hand,the worry about the rise of robotics is justifiable,considering that jobs become casualties.As robots are versatile machines that often complete tasks with precision and ask for no perks such as insurance and paid time off,they appear more competitive than human beings in certain occupations.The assembly line in the automobile industry has already shown that the shift from human labor to machines can yield higher productivity.Another doubt people hold lies in the safety issue because there are situations where robots fail to handle an emergency flexibly but operate as they are programmed,causing damages that otherwise humans could avoid.These incidents inevitably lower people’s trust in automation.

On the other hand,I would side with others who have confidence in robots.Implementing robots benefit employees since they free workers from repetitive and tedious tasks and allow them more time for creative work and innovation.As for dangerous tasks such as defusing bombs or space exploration,robots save lives and go beyond human beings’capacities,accomplishing what people cannot do.Additionally,in a daily life context,this game-changing technology has been adopted in the healthcare industry,assisting surgery or helping disabled and senior people to lead better lives.Its application in entertainment,households,and personal life is thriving,leading to further improvements in individuals’lives.

In conclusion,as with any revolutionary technology,robots would give rise to drastic changes,including negative ones like job displacement.But new industries and businesses that people never imagined would also ensue.Therefore,I am convinced that robots will play a crucial role in humans’future progression.

(311 words)

【語言積累】

undergo v.經(jīng)歷，經(jīng)受

express concerns表達擔憂

adverse impacts消極影響

justifiable adj.有理由的

casualty n.受害者

versatile adj.多才多藝的，有多種技能的

precision n.精確，精準

perks n.特殊待遇

paid time off帶薪休假

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