托福獨立寫作高分范文賞析：成功全靠運氣好？

托福獨立寫作高分范文賞析：成功全靠運氣好？

托福寫作難點話題一覽

Does luck have anything to do with success?

“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

首先題目里的nothing to do有點太過極端了。很明顯是出題者給大家挖的坑，即使同意這個觀點考生也不能太過武斷，要避免觀點太過絕對和偏頗。所以建議大家選擇的態(tài)度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意，如果要同意立場盡量維持在“很大程度上同意”會比較好。考生可以指出luck確實存在，然后展開說可能導致人們成功的若干原因：誠實、睿智、幽默;執(zhí)著;肯于做不喜歡的事情等等。

本話題高分范文賞析

Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. "It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. "I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. "As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. "But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. "I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one." You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.

When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.

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