children spend long time studying both in and after school-雅思高分范文

雅思寫作題目

In some countries,parents expect their children to spend a long time studying both in and after school and have less free time.What are the positive and negative effects on children and the society they live in?

雅思寫作范文-版本1

開頭段

It is true that education plays an indispensable role in children’s development.While many people argue that students will gain benefits if they spend most of their time on study,I believe that it has negative influences on both children and society.

教育在孩子的成長過程中發(fā)揮著不可或缺的角色。雖然許多人認(rèn)為如果學(xué)生將大部分時間都用在學(xué)習(xí)上的話會獲益良多，我認(rèn)為這對孩子和社會都會造成消極的影響。

主體段1

On the one hand,there are two primary reasons why children should not only study well at school but also reinforce knowledge at home.Firstly,they can gain countless opportunities to broaden their horizons in all fields like science,technology,and art,leading to comprehensive development.For instance,a schoolboy who took a long time learning in and after school was proficient in both English and Japanese,because he had many chances to listen,read,write and speak constantly.Secondly,in terms of society,this helps decline the juvenile delinquency rate and maintain social order.They could not be exposed to all sorts of temptations such as drugs or gangs,as they spent too much time on studying means less time spent on elsewhere.

一方面，孩子不僅應(yīng)該在學(xué)校里學(xué)習(xí)，還應(yīng)該在家里增進(jìn)知識，這一觀點(diǎn)基于以下兩個主要原因。首先，他們能夠獲得在各個方面（科學(xué)，技術(shù)，和藝術(shù)等）擴(kuò)展自己視野的無窮機(jī)會，促進(jìn)全面發(fā)展。例如，一個在學(xué)校里和學(xué)校外都花很長時間學(xué)習(xí)的孩子，因?yàn)橛性S多機(jī)會去聽，讀，寫和說，會同時精通英語和日語。其次，對于社會來說，這有助于減少減少青少年犯罪，維護(hù)社會秩序。他們不會受到諸如毒品和幫派的誘惑，因?yàn)樗麄兇蠖鄶?shù)時間都用在了學(xué)習(xí)上，沒有時間干別的。

主體段2

On the other hand,I suppose that these are outweighed by the drawbacks.One reason is that children who are addicted to learning,instead of playing outdoor activities,are more prone to obesity and encounter health problems.To be specific,when they keep their eyes glued to books or screens for several hours,it may cause headaches and eye diseases.In addition,if they are forced to sit all day long for researching,the majority of them might lack not only social skills but also practical experience.They would not know how to choose suitable clothes to pay attention or how to build a strong relationship with other people.

另一方面，我認(rèn)為這些好處比不上它們的缺陷。一個原因是，癡迷于學(xué)習(xí)而非戶外運(yùn)動的孩子更容易肥胖，遭遇健康問題。具體來說，當(dāng)他們盯著書本或者屏幕連續(xù)好幾個小時的時候，可能會引發(fā)頭痛和眼部疾病。此外，如果他們被迫整天坐著研究，大多數(shù)人可能會缺乏社交技能和實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)。他們不知道如何選擇合適的衣服，也不知道如何與他人搭建關(guān)系。

結(jié)論

In conclusion,it is certainly true that a long time on studying brings many advantages,but this is by no means pupils are not obtained negative impacts.

總的來說，用很長時間學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)然有許多好處，但這并不意味這孩子不會受到負(fù)面影響。

雅思寫作范文-版本2

開頭段

Nowadays,it is a widely common opinion among parents that children should not only do well in school but also reinforce acknowledge after school.As a result,sending children to extra training school is not unfamiliar to any of us,which leads to a significant decrease in children’s free time.Though there is a belief that the press increases motivation,I argue that the over-loaded press will cause negative effects.

如今，父母中很流行的一個想法是，孩子不僅應(yīng)該在學(xué)校里好好學(xué)習(xí)，而且課后也要增進(jìn)知識。正因如此，把孩子送去課外輔導(dǎo)班對我們?nèi)魏稳硕疾凰隳吧＿@導(dǎo)致孩子空閑時間大大下降。雖然有人認(rèn)為壓力會提升動力，但我認(rèn)為過多的壓力只會產(chǎn)生消極的影響。

主體段1

To start with,long-time sitting in front of a computer or a desk is harmful to children’s health since they do not exercise adequately which is reported very helpful to enhance their physical conditions.The increasing number of fat children is to a certain extent due to the lack of exercise.In the future,these children are very likely to be sub-healthy.Besides,it is not sure that the longer time children study the better outcomes they can get.Low efficiency will result in nothing.

首先，長時間坐在電腦前或者書桌前對孩子的健康不利。因?yàn)樗麄儧]有進(jìn)行對自己身體狀況有利的適當(dāng)?shù)腻憻?。肥胖兒童?shù)量的增加在一定程度上就是因?yàn)槿狈﹀憻?。未來，這些孩子很有可能會亞健康。除此之外，并不一定孩子學(xué)習(xí)時間越長，結(jié)果越好。低效率可能導(dǎo)致一無所獲。

主體段2

When it comes to the effects on society,from my understanding,the minus impact overweighs the positive ones.First of all,the whole society looks undynamic since the fresh blood of the society-children-are not activated.Secondly,the building of diversity of the world will slow down for children who are limited to books lack creativity.Lastly,the social relationship will become weaker and weaker because the number of people who care about it is falling while the opinion of competition will become more prevalent as a result of the repetitive stress on the success from the adults.

至于對社會的影響，從我的理解來看，負(fù)面影響要大于正面的。首先，由于社會的新鮮血液-孩子-不活躍，整個社會看起來缺乏動力。其次，世界多樣性的構(gòu)建可能會降低速度，因?yàn)橹粫x書的孩子缺乏創(chuàng)造力。最后，人際關(guān)系會變得越來越弱，因?yàn)樽⒅厮娜藬?shù)下降。與此同時，因?yàn)楦改笍?qiáng)調(diào)成功，競爭意識則會變得更加流行。

結(jié)論

In short,overlong time on studying has negative effects on both children and society.Children should be released from books after school so that they will find the wonderful aspects of society,so that they would like to pay some efforts to make the world more colorful in the future.

總的來說，長時間學(xué)習(xí)對孩子和社會都有不良的影響。孩子放學(xué)之后應(yīng)該從書本中解放出來，以便他們能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)社會美好的一方面，并愿意為世界變得更加豐富多彩而付出努力。

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