2022年1月22雅思大作文范文:兒童肥胖不健康是政府的責(zé)任嗎

2023-06-13 13:14:28 來源：中國教育在線

2022年1月22雅思大作文范文

2022年1月22雅思大作文范文:兒童肥胖不健康是政府的責(zé)任嗎，關(guān)于這個問題，接下來中國教育在線就給大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

政府類

【題目解析】

青少年肥胖和健康是雅思寫作經(jīng)?？嫉脑掝}，之前多以報告類型的題目出現(xiàn)，本次是同意與否題型，所以在審題的時候同學(xué)們要把問題看清楚。另外，在審題時要確認(rèn)自己的立場，即同意或不同意的觀點是什么。在這個題目中，政府應(yīng)該擔(dān)負(fù)責(zé)任，可以從兩個角度進行思考：1 為什么是政府要負(fù)責(zé)解決這個問題？（從政府職權(quán)角度）2 為什么這個問題要讓政府來負(fù)責(zé)解決？（從政府功能角度）；同樣，如果同學(xué)們覺得其他層面，比如社會，家庭，學(xué)校也有這個責(zé)任，都可以從這兩個角度來分析，提出自己的論點和論證。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：改寫題目+自己觀點

主體第一段：在兒童肥胖和不健康的問題上，政府應(yīng)該擔(dān)負(fù)責(zé)任

主體第二段：家庭和學(xué)校在兒童肥胖和不健康的問題上，也擔(dān)負(fù)重要的責(zé)任

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)全文，只依靠政府是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的，需要家庭，學(xué)校與政府的合力

【參考范文】

Children in many parts of the world are increasingly becoming obese and unhealthy. Some people think it is the government's responsibility to mitigate health issues. In my opinion, families and schools should shoulder more responsibility in tackling this problem.

Childhood obesity and unhealthiness should be partly blamed on the authority. There is no doubt that the government is accountable for maintaining a healthy population and increasing economic growth. If numerous diseases related to obesity occur to the younger generation, the chance of them being vulnerable to severe diseases is high, which would result in a slowdown of national growth. Moreover, the measures made by the government are effective on a large scale. For example, the UK food factories have been required to put warnings on the packaging of junk food and ready meals since the 1990s; thus, people would think twice when consuming such foods.

On the other hand, families and schools play a decisive role in solving this problem. First, parents have direct control over what their children eat. To be precise, parents can follow a healthy routine by adding more vegetables and less oil to daily meals. In addition to this, schools can lower the obesity rate by consolidating sports infrastructure and engaging more students in physical exercise. Therefore, children can work out frequently instead of leading a sedentary lifestyle. Also, schools need to instill the importance of a balanced diet to equip students with long-term health consciousness.

In conclusion, I argue that the incidents of lifestyle diseases cannot be effectively curbed by the governing body alone. Parenting and schooling should form joint efforts with the government to overcome this situation.

【語言積累】

1.mitigate 減輕

2.be partly blamed on 部分歸咎于…

3.is accountable for 對…負(fù)責(zé)

4.being vulnerable to severe diseases 易患嚴(yán)重疾病

5.slowdown 經(jīng)濟放緩

6.play a decisive role in 起決定作用

7.healthy routine 健康習(xí)慣

8.lower the obesity rate 降低肥胖率

9.consolidating sports infrastructure 整合體育基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施

10.work out frequently 經(jīng)常鍛煉

11.sedentary lifestyle 久坐不動的生活方式