2022年5月21日雅思寫(xiě)作task1回憶:社區(qū)中心10年前和現(xiàn)在對(duì)比

2022年5月21日雅思寫(xiě)作task1回憶

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show a community centre’s changes in the last ten years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：圖形根據(jù)考場(chǎng)回憶繪制，具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類(lèi)】

動(dòng)態(tài)地圖題

【題目解析】

這個(gè)題目中有兩幅圖，描述了一個(gè)社區(qū)中心在過(guò)去10年內(nèi)的變化情況。圖中有“指南針”，故描寫(xiě)的時(shí)候需要使用“東南西北”，而不是“上下左右”。第一幅圖需要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，第二幅圖需要使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)以及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

Para 1 = 題目改寫(xiě) + 概述

Para 2 = 描寫(xiě)第一幅圖的內(nèi)容

Para 3 = 描寫(xiě)第二幅圖的內(nèi)容

【參考范文】

The two floor plans clearly illustrate the development of a community centre during the last decade. Overall, only slight changes have been made to this venue although it has improved its functionality.

In the past, a hall that could accommodate 100 people was in the middle, in the north of which was a big office and in the south was a storage room. Meanwhile, a toilet and a small office were situated in the south of the warehouse. In the west of the centre, there was a garden and a parking lot but four small offices, another storage room, and a kitchen were located in the east.

At present, the large office has been bisected into a storage room and a smaller office. A new cafeteria has taken the place of the storage room in the south of the hall and the office next to the toilet has been converted into a café. The garden has gone and is replaced by a spot for indoor sports. The four offices have been combined into a large one and other areas remain unchanged.

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