劍橋雅思13Test1寫(xiě)作Task1范文及解析WRITING TASK 1

劍橋雅思13Test1寫(xiě)作Task1范文及解析WRITING TASK 1

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant。

題目分析

要點(diǎn)

1把變化之處用筆標(biāo)出序號(hào),按順序逐一陳述;

2主體段每段描述一幅圖,重點(diǎn)對(duì)是2010年的描述。

錯(cuò)誤理解：

1描述兩幅圖時(shí)都不能使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),也不能使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

2.2010年的public car park是在醫(yī)院以外的東部,應(yīng)用on the east of....

劍橋雅思13寫(xiě)作范文：

There are two maps shown. The first of which shows the City Hospital in 2007 and the second shows changes made in 2010.

In 2007, we can clearly see that the city hospital was surrounded by a ring road and to the south on 'Hospital Road' there were 6 bus stops, 3 on each side and a Staff and Public Car park on the east side of the road.

By 2010, several changes had been made. The ring road remained, but now included a roundabout to the south that connect Hospital Road and a new large bus station, to replace the bus stops On the east side of the hospital, there was a new Public car Park, with the old area now being used solely for staff.

In summary, the development has increased the space for drivers as well as the use of public transport. It has eliminated some of the problems due to traffic flow.

范文譯文：

題中有兩張圖。第一張圖顯示的是2007年的市醫(yī)院,第二張圖顯示的是2010年的一些變化。

在2007年,我們可以很清晰地看到市醫(yī)院由一條環(huán)路圍繞,南邊是醫(yī)院路,附有6個(gè)公交車(chē)站,每側(cè)有3個(gè),路東還有一個(gè)員工與公共停車(chē)場(chǎng)。

到2010年時(shí),發(fā)生了一些變化。環(huán)路仍然維持原狀,但現(xiàn)在南邊加了一個(gè)環(huán)島,與醫(yī)院路連接起來(lái)。還有一處新建的大型公交車(chē)站,取代了原來(lái)的幾個(gè)公交車(chē)站。在醫(yī)院東側(cè),有一處新的公共停車(chē)場(chǎng),而原有的停車(chē)場(chǎng)改為僅供員工使用

總之,這次開(kāi)發(fā)增加了停車(chē)的空間以及公共交通。這樣就消除了交通流量帶來(lái)的一些問(wèn)題。

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