雅思大作文范文：減少成年文盲比教育年輕人要重要

雅思大作文范文：減少成年文盲比教育年輕人要重要

雅思大作文題目：

Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries.However,educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】

教育類

【題目解析】

題目大意：年輕群體的教育在許多國(guó)家都是優(yōu)先的。但教育文盲的承認(rèn)更重要，政府應(yīng)該投入更多的資金在這方面。

難點(diǎn)：本題將教育的課題上升到了教育公平性、被忽略的成年文盲群體上。看似是一道不容置疑的題目，但很容易寫(xiě)偏。一些考生會(huì)在文中討論教育的重要性，而非為什么減少成年文盲比教育年輕人要重要。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：年輕一代的教育是社會(huì)普遍重視的，但成年人的教育幾乎是盲點(diǎn)。有人提出這值得更重視。個(gè)人表示同意。

主體第一段：論述消除成年文盲對(duì)整體社會(huì)公平性的重要意義。

主體第二段：將議題深入到成年群體中的女性文盲是更值得關(guān)注的。

主體第三段：反駁一些人認(rèn)為年輕人教育才是未來(lái)的觀點(diǎn)。文盲的現(xiàn)象有逐代傳遞現(xiàn)象，并且成年文盲的存在必將阻礙教育普及的進(jìn)程。

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)調(diào)消除成年文盲在當(dāng)下的緊迫性。

【參考范文】

In contrast to the worldwide awareness of educating young generations,adult illiteracy seems a blind spot in modern society.Therefore,some people suggest that government funding and attention should be paid more on reducing the number of uneducated grown-ups.In my opinion,it would be a necessary step to take.

It has to be recognized that the eradication of illiteracy serves as a key link in the struggle for social equity,but in many countries,large groups of adults have never been given the chance to learn,to read and write.A country cannot truly develop if some people are highly educated while others are completely illiterate.The latter will never be able to play their full part as a member of the society,which can easily result in a widening gap between different social groups.In turn,the stabilization of our world suffers.

Besides,female education and development share an even more powerful relationship,but the particularly high rate of women illiteracy is alarming.This adult group requires particular attention,not just because women need to have more participation in the labor market,but also because educated mothers are more likely to ensure the well-being and development of the young generations.By contrast,a child from a family without basic level of knowledge would possibly end up being unable to access proper education.

Some people would claim that the core of future development ultimately lies with the younger generations,and that illiteracy would eventually become a problem of the past,if only the young can accept proper education.However,this simplistic notion fails to consider a substantial mechanism—the lack of education easily passes down through generations.Inevitably,adult illiteracy would hinder the progress of universal education from going further.

To conclude,governments must take this matter more seriously,increasing their investments in adults’education in order to guarantee education to all.After all,when educating young generation has made significant achievement,it would be frustrating to see global progress on reducing illiteracy stagnating.

(335 words)

【語(yǔ)言積累】

1.in contrast to與…形成鮮明對(duì)比的

2.adult illiteracy成年文盲

3.a blind spot一個(gè)盲區(qū)/盲點(diǎn)

4.a necessary step to take一個(gè)必要的步驟

5.eradication n.消除

6.a key link關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)

7.social equity社會(huì)平等

8.result in導(dǎo)致

9.a widening gap逐漸加大的差距

10.social groups社會(huì)群體

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